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Grade 3:  Effective Writing

Organization

 

Writing Prompt:  Write a composition about the best day you ever had.

Effective Writing Trait:  Organization

             ·     3.14D:  Write in different forms for different purposes such as list to record, letters to invite or thank, and stories or 

                    poems to entertain.

·        3.18A:  Generate ideas for writing by using prewriting techniques such as drawing and listing key thoughts.

·        3.18B:  Develop drafts

Focused Revision / Editing:

·        3.18C:  Revise selected drafts for varied purposes, including to achieve a sense of audience, precise word choices and vivid images.

·        3.18D:  Edit for appropriate grammar, spelling, punctuation, and features of polished writing.

·        3.19 C: Determine how his/her own writing achieves its purposes.

          MINI-LESSON                                                               GOALS

Day 1

Preparing To Write Using A Prompt

Students will prepare to use the prompt stated and write their compositions.

Day 2

Rate-A-Lead

Teacher begins by sharing examples of good and "not so good" leads.  Students will analyze examples of leads in five different books.  They will rate the effectiveness of each lead and support their conclusions.  Rate a Lead Chart

Day 3

Play the Scramble Game

Using transition words and context clues, students will predict the logical order of events from Ira Sleeps Over by Bernard Waber.  Scramble Game Sentence Strips

Day 4

Wrap It Up: Choosing the Best Ending

Students will decide on the best possible conclusion for two incomplete passages.

Day 5

Focused Revision and Editing Using Student Papers

Students will analyze examples of compositions using the focused revision and editing

TEKS.  Then, students return to their compositions to revise and edit.

 

Books To Teach Organization

 

Examples of Effective Leads:

Barefoot:  Escape on the Underground Railroad by Pamela Duncan Edwards

The True Story of the 3 Little Pigs by Jon Scieszha

Miss Nelson Is Missing by Harry Allard and James Marshall

      All About Turkeys by Jim Arnosky

      Saving Sweetness by Diane Stanley

      Enemy Pie by Derek Munson

      Horrible Harry and the Dungeon by Suzy Kline

      Wilma Unlimited by Kathleen Krull

      Mick Harte Was Here by Barbara Park

 

Examples of Time and Sequence:

      The Secret Shortcut by Mark Teague

      Comet's Nine Lives by Jan Brett

      Butterfly House by Eve Bunting

      The Good Luck Cat by Joy Harjo

      The Journey of Oliver K Woodman by Darcy Pattison

 

Examples of Interesting Endings:

      Just Like Daddy by Frank Asch

      The Paper Boy by Dave Pilkey

      Charlie Anderson by Barbara Abercombie

      White Dynamite and Curly Kid by Bill Martin, Jr and John Archambault

      Fig Pudding by Ralph Fletcher