Grade 3:
Effective Writing
Organization
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Writing Prompt: Write a composition about the best day
you ever had. Effective Writing
Trait: Organization ·
3.14D: Write in different forms
for different purposes such as list to record, letters to invite or thank,
and stories or poems
to entertain. ·
3.18A: Generate ideas for writing by using prewriting
techniques such as drawing and listing key thoughts. ·
3.18B: Develop drafts Focused
Revision / Editing: ·
3.18C: Revise selected drafts for varied purposes,
including to achieve a sense of audience, precise
word choices and vivid images. ·
3.18D: Edit for appropriate grammar, spelling,
punctuation, and features of polished writing. ·
3.19 C:
Determine how his/her own writing achieves its purposes. MINI-LESSON
GOALS |
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Day 1 |
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Students will prepare to
use the prompt stated and write their compositions. |
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Day 2 |
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Teacher begins by sharing
examples of good and "not so good" leads. Students will analyze examples of leads in
five different books. They will rate
the effectiveness of each lead and support their conclusions. |
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Day 3 |
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Using transition words and
context clues, students will predict the logical order of events from Ira
Sleeps Over by Bernard Waber. |
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Day 4 |
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Students will decide on the
best possible conclusion for two incomplete passages. |
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Day 5 |
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Students will analyze
examples of compositions using the focused revision and editing TEKS. Then, students return to their compositions
to revise and edit |
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Books
To Teach Organization
Examples of
Effective Leads:
Barefoot: Escape on the
Underground Railroad by
Pamela Duncan Edwards
The True Story of the 3 Little Pigs by Jon Scieszha
Miss Nelson Is Missing by Harry Allard and James Marshall
All About
Saving Sweetness by Diane Stanley
Enemy Pie by Derek Munson
Horrible Harry and the Dungeon by
Suzy Kline
Wilma Unlimited by Kathleen Krull
Mick Harte
Was Here by Barbara Park
Examples of
Time and Sequence:
The Secret Shortcut by Mark Teague
Comet's Nine Lives by Jan Brett
Butterfly House by Eve Bunting
The Good Luck Cat by Joy Harjo
The Journey of Oliver K Woodman by Darcy Pattison
Examples of
Interesting Endings:
Just Like Daddy by Frank Asch
The Paper Boy by Dave Pilkey
Charlie Anderson by Barbara Abercombie
White Dynamite and Curly Kid by
Bill Martin, Jr and John Archambault
Fig Pudding by Ralph Fletcher